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fight with a cannon, Landon, Liam, Alex, Nathan, Lastat - Coggle Diagram

- - - - I think its close to the actual page but its not there yet
- - - - (NOTES ON CONTENT) i don't think he should be rewarded because it is still murder and murder is bad
      - (NOTES ON STYLE) spelt very well and story was good
      - (RANKING SPECULATION) ✰✰✰
        
        liked it very much and overall a really good story
- - - - I don't think this was the actual ending because of adding some thins that weren't in the actual story but it isn't a fully bad ending