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Thesis statement
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introduction
Upside down triangle: start broad in introduction, then get more specific toward characters.
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Conclusion
Regular triangle: start narrow and get broader, start with thesis and get more narrow to the characters .
Restate thesis: Hannake and Mr. Knightly play similar roles in each characters life in which they are involved in awkward social situations.
Reinforce paper: Summarize the information including the evidence and stuff already stated. Like how Hannake and Mr. knightly relate to each other and the situations there in.
World connections: Show how this topic relates to the real world; How awkward situation can change someones life and personality.
start broad: talking about how people we wouldn't expect, can play a great role in our lives, how awkward situations can greatly affect someones personality.
Get narrower and specific toward the text; open both text to the people and explain what it's about.
Introduce the characters Hanneke and Mr. knightly, compare them maybe on how there similar.
Thesis statement: answer the question: Mr knightly and Hanneke both play an important role in each of there roles in both story in which they create awkward social situations for there main charters.
Body paragraph #3
Transition sentence: Both characters play a crucial role in the main characters life in which they push them into difficult social situations.
Topic sentence: Both characters play similar in which they call out the main character for the misconduct they created.
Evidence: "She could never forgive herself that her initial response to the happy news from both her dear friend and her poor sister"
Evidence: "How could you be
so unfeeling to Miss Bates? How could you be so insolent in your wit to a woman of her character, age, and situation?—Emma"
Analyze: Both quotes show similar situations and in which characters are called out and forced into awkward situations.
In both story's the main characters are put in situations where they are called out by these side characters Mr. Knightly and Hannake. These characters humble them and help them learn toward the future.
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