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Dystopia Writing SUM - Coggle Diagram
Dystopia Writing SUM
Perspective 1: the government (Callie)
background
authority
power
middleman
trade
forced
chip
plot idea
conversation
-sympathy?
-guilt?
beginning
dream of the past
conversation of two people
setting: beside the wall
4 min free write
main character: callie
works in the government
questions the system
psychological description
main part
conversation
colleague/friend: Isabella
questions the system out loud
results of the previous test &name list of the next tour
description of the environment
workplace
display screen
monitoring the city
depressing
Perspective 2: the physically-fit (Balint)
background
pleasant life
satisfied
don't care about the truth
unconvincing
plot idea
daily life
description of Balint's living condition(housing, servants, closing, etc.)
during community workout
results of the previous test
best score out of all
appreciated
conversation with a friend(Heerad)
praised by Heerad
exemplar in the whole community
always has good score in the Test
Heerad-envious
has best living condition ever
Balint
worships the government
hope he can work there
government: described as humane
Perspective 3: the disabled (Albert)
background
the disabled will be killed eventually
the ones who see through all deception
handicapped
powerless
subversive, rebellious
plot idea
a glance of his daily life
room
scruffy
untidy
bad living condition
talking to the sun
lonely
has no friend
complain about the injustice of the world
helpless
in despair
about his past
Story Elements&Dystopian elements
Story elements
plot
The journey of Callie forming a fair world of human beings and animals
Theme/message
Extreme dominion causes problems
character
Callie: courageous, optimistic, compassionate
Albert: noble, judicious, cordial
Isabella: conservative
Balint: clueless, unconvincing
conflict
Callie's desire of freedom for everyone vs.
her chip that may explode if she tries to escape
cameras&recorders (surveillance)
clueless&unconvincing citizens
unpredictable outside world
setting
human farm
designed by animals to revenge
has a utopia illusion for normal citizens
restricted
morbid truth
depressing, despairing
audience
dystopian fiction readers
this story can be appealing by its interlocking plot&presentation of the dark side of humanity
dystopian elements
Trends
dominion, power, control
figurehead
the government: provides the citizens everything they need
the animals: the figurehead of the human farm and the outside animals society-religion
Post-apocalypic event
Before 1078, humans domesticated animals for hundreds of years as a food source
Animal rebels
A war between the role of humans and animals
A contract was signed and a wall was built
reversed the role of human and animal
the protagonist
curious about the past
risk taker
willing to sacrifice herself for a better future for others
faulty of the society
innocent new generations of human have a destiny to be eaten as a consequence of the war
dystopian elements
restriction
never leave the community unless on the Tour
never question the system
conformity
everyone must workout(except for the disabled)
everyone must worship animals
propaganda
religion of respecting animals
surveillance
cameras and audio recorders everywhere
chip in everyone's body to track their locations
dehumanization
everyone has a code
the whole system of human farm
utopia illusion
government provides everything(food, housing, entertainment, etc.)
citizens are free to do anything except for going outside