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Writing Task 02 - Coggle Diagram

- - - - look at the card
        
        Statement/introduction
        
        outline keywords
        
        Task itself
      - decide what type of essay is this card
        
        planning
        
        type of the essay
        
        opinion
        
        your own conclusion - opinion
        
        ideas
        
        summary of the ideas
        
        Introduction
        
        traditions and affordability
        
        MAIN BODY - List the arguments for different points of view
        
        paragraph 01
        
        living together
        
        traditions(emotions)
        
        domestic reasons - more secure(robbery/fire or health issues)
        
        it is cheaper to live together
        
        paraghraph 02
        
        independence
        
        self-esteem/psychological state(not to be a burden)
        
        not enough space
        
        family members can visit grandparents or vice versa
        
        Conclusion
        
        Better to live alone with sufficient savings/financing
        
        Better to live together since it affects the psychological health better and helps make strong bonds.
- - - - ways of paraphrasing
        
        synonyms
        
        interesting
        
        engaging
        
        alluring
        
        reverse the sctructure
        
        subject + verb + objects, adverbs
        
        active voice
        
        passive voice
        
        Grandparents living together with their families seem to be an excellent option for those commentators who are believed to feel that way.
        
        replace the phrase or the word with a similar phrase or word
        
        negative meaning
        
        Authorities prohibit smoking
        
        Smoking is not allowed here
        
        less repetition
    - - semi-conclusion
        
        The author supports the idea of grandparents living independently.
  - - - Point of view 01
        
        2-3 arguments in favour
      - Point of view 02
        
        2-3 argumens in favour
    - - Introduction
        
        paraphrasing of the point of view
      - Argument 01(emotional state - enrichment)
        
        Example. Grandchildren playing with their grandmother...
      - Argument 02
        
        example