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Personal Odyssey Narrative - Reid Ravassipour - Coggle Diagram
Personal Odyssey Narrative - Reid Ravassipour
Important Characters
All of the Kings in the foreign land because they will all help him minus the King of Kiago (Atupo) who intentionally sabotages the journey.
The Gods Pilgro will help the crew journey from time to time but will often punish them if there is no sacrifice to him.
Ghrisam is the prince of Angelo and he is the one in charge of his voyage across the seas and will be the one to return home safely with his loyal crew,
Plot
In the year 100 B.E, a great war occurs between the Anglianes (who are from Angelos) and the Carbonos (from Carbate). The war began because the Carbonos believed that the Anglianes stole their precious ancient treasure. The war has gone on for decades now and both sides want to live in piece.
Grisham, the prince of Angelos, is feed up of the unneeded deaths between the two. He seeks out a journey across the world to find the ancient treasure that started the war. He gather a crew of 11 people and they are off after they give gifts to the God of voyage, Pilgro.
After a week of journey they arrive in Antiquo where they are meet politely by the natives. After a few weeks and talking to the King they realize that the Kingdom of Alvero might have the treasure.
In Alvero they hear that the king of Bastino at one point had the treasure and so they were off, byut they forgot to give ofference to the God Piligro and they are blown of course to the land of Kiago.
When they arrive in Kiago they are greeted by a friend of the prince who offers them safe passage across the mountains that boarder between Kiago and Bastino.
Whilst crossing the Alps they realize they have a lack of resources and the Prince faces a grave desition, and they decide to proceed and after three days without rest they arrive in Bastino safely.
The king of Bastino gladly gives them the ancient treasure in return that Bastino and Angelo create a alliance for future battles and wars.
After this five year journey they arrive home safely and the war ends in a truce.
Geography
The land of Angles is ingolfed in flames in many parts and is just a war zone between the two coutnries.
Kaigo is a warm place but boarders the alps which are full of snow and other dangers.
Bastino is like a utopia and full of green lucious life in every nick of the kingdom.
Carbate is a very cold place because is is build upon the lowers edges of the alps.
Antiquo is a nice place with trees but no hills or mountains and is a island.
Alvero is a kingdom in chaos with little order but great plant life.
Route of Journey
The journey begins in Angelo where they travel to Antiquo by boast. They they travel to Alvero in boat and then Kaigo in boat. Then they travels the alps into Bastino by foot. Lastly they travel back to Angelo in boat and give the gift to Carbate by foot.
My Map
https://inkarnate.com/m/RZv39d-reids-odyssey/