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scratch pad "whys?"
LOGLINES
A woman mourning the loss of a romantic partner struggles with her grip on reality as her loneliness becomes too much to bear.
After losing a romantic partner, a woman's psyche collapses under the weight of her new loneliness.
Feeling socially distant and reclusive after the loss of a long-term romance, a woman struggles with the reality of her new found loneliness.
A reclusive young woman struggles with her grip on reality as her own loneliness becomes an obsession.
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A reclusive young woman struggles with her grip on reality as she becomes fixated on her own loneliness
A reclusive young woman struggles with her grip on reality as her own loneliness becomes too much to bear
A reclusive young woman struggles with her grip on reality as she comes to terms with her own loneliness
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SYMBOLS/MOTIFS/THEMES
fish tanks
the vivid colors of the fish hint at the surreal, dream-like nature of the world. It's quiet, constant observation fo the character provide a pervasive sense of paranoia. It's presence in the tank represent the character's own mind-prison of delusion.
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flaws, character traits, etc.
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who is Anna?
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the relationship represents Chloe's connection to people in general. Without it she feels lost, disconnected from the rest of society
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How can we develop empathy with a character who is NOT special? With a protagonist who does not really matter to the world they exist within?
By bearing witness to CHOICES that matter, even when their consequences do not. E.g. when Joe chooses to be brave in the face of certain failure. When he chooses to do what he believes to be the right thing in the face of certain death.
By establishing NEEDS and DESIRES that WE relate to, that can be understood in terms of our own lives.
We have to WANT the character's DESIRES to be filled and react to the fulfillment (or lack thereof) of their NEEDS
How do Drive and Blade Runner get us to care about the needs and desires of characters so detached from their own world and even from us? Do we empathize with that detachment as an obstacle in our own lives?
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