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GROUP 2
GROUP 1:Blizzard
GROUP 3
GROUP 5
GROUP 6
Sentence: Storm at sea
RUINED HOUSE 5 SENSES
sight
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feel
Touch: biting cold, Piercing chills ran down my spine, whipping gale
Sight: White duvet of snow, dark gloom lurking beyond, vicious snowflakes whizzing past, ballistic snow turbines, Christmas snow globe, clouds combust into white confetti as though winter was celebrating its birthday
Hearing: Rasping, roaring silver, breezy whistling,
Sight: Dark grey clouds.
Towering waves
Smell: Oddly anosmic
Taste: Brief bitter taste of dust speckles, fresh coolness of snow
Feel
features of the house:
-faded, dirty, cracking paint
-moss draped all over the crevices
-dark and eerie hue
-shingles had been torn from the roof
-unkempt yard
-wind whistling through broken windows
-leftovers of the curtain moving gently in the breeze
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the house looks ruined
Storm at sea
Sight ; The doors fell flat with a loud thud
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sight
HEAR
Smell
Hear: The screeching of seagulls.
Waves crashing against the rocks. Howling winds.
hear
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the bashing of waves against the boat
untamed chaos of blue
the walls are rough and patchy
wet slippery moss
the sound of birds that are inside
the eerie
the floorboards are creaky
Smell ; Fragnance of candles
the odd smell of salt water
the powerful roar of the winds
Touch ; The house was damp and the droplets from the ceiling poured readily on my scalp
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Its a blemished and wrecked house
Taste: Salty air
Feel: The trickling of raindrops on my face.
Gusts of wind:
the 'fishy' smell from the marine life underneath the ocean surface
Smell: The faint smell of fish
Hearing ; Unstable furniture made a creeking sound
Waves fighting each other with mighty ferociousness
Pungent and disturbing scent, like a lixture of multiple candles
depressing state of the sky pictured as an ash coloured painting
the distinctive screams from the fellow members on the boat
Taste ; inhaling the moist air and dust attacking lungs
The structure of the house is deformed
The raging thunders and the loud crackle from the lightning
first feeling is nausea and sensation of danger , a positivity in the surrounding may show its presence after the storm
and in the eerie darkness, a crying voice of hope
feeling you get from the atmosphere:
the refreshing smell of the cold storm wind roaming through your nose
Atmosphere: Negative
Words: Crashing, Howling, Screeching, Grey, Dull,
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Positive Scenario
Thriving Vegetation, Crispy air , Colourful
negative atmoshpere : the atmoshere in the ruined house is very eerie and gives an impression of horror, not only does the looks of the house aid this feeling but also the various sounds of the insects and the rodents that roam around there. allnthe walls that are screaming its remorseful history
It would be chilly, making me shiver and the house radiates somewhat of a positive atmosphere because of the lively nature surrounding that area
blast of cold wind
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GROUP 4
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fear loomed over me
beautifully damaged, newfound appreciation of architecture, feeling of home, happy memories
sight :
lightning
biting cold
earsplitting thunder
Taste
Towering walls of water fueled by the powerful winds
The salty air from the splashes of sea water
The lump of nervousness in your throat
the grim horror that held on to the stagnant waters
a swirling storm of screaming silver,
hazy mist, the bleakness of space and cold, downpour
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The night sky was lit with sparkling stars unaware of the dangers below
The satisfying sound of waves crashing against each other.
Unending rage as a battle for dominance between the elements of water and wind commences
Splash of cobalt
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musty stale air
the smell of the moss
pungent smell
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