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On Going (Title and poem (A departure (Leaving this world), The loss of a…
On Going
Title and poem
The loss of a loved one
The memory will go on
Eligiac tone
Suffered for a long time
Life goes on
A calm, peaceful tone
Acceptance of the death
A departure
Leaving this world
No memories
Human bod/connection
Personal relationships/family
In the moment
triggered by the connection of my kiss
against your paper temple
Thin
Metaphor
She registers hi love
Old
Fragile
instruments
Only entertaining the idea that she'll live
Piontless
Cold, impersonal
Links to music
an ancient child
Needs to be looked after
She's like a child
Oxymoron
Didn't grow up
Unable to help herself
your breath working at the skin ...
like a blustery wind at a blind
Worn
Translucent
Ageing skin
only one measurement I needed
Love
Human connection
to measure, record and monitor
Things to keep you alive
you were disconnected from these
They don't tell you about
her
fragile on your side
Vulnerable
the flicker open of your eyes ...
half-second of recorded understanding
Quick but important
you slipped back into the sleep of their slow-closing
Euphemism for death