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mock paper 1: a Christmas carol and Macbeth (exam technique) (Q1) (AO'…
mock paper 1: a Christmas carol and Macbeth (exam technique)
Q1)
high grade criteria
At the top of the level, a candidate’s response is likely to be a critical,exploratory, well-structured argument. It takes a conceptualised approach to the full task supported by a range of judicious references. There will be a fine-grained and insightful analysis of language and form and structure supported by judicious use of subject terminology. Convincing exploration of one or more ideas/perspectives/contextual factors/interpretations.
AO's
1)
Critical, exploratory, conceptualised response to
task and whole text
Judicious use of precise references to support
interpretation(s)
2)
Analysis of writer’s methods with subject
terminology used judiciously
Exploration of effects of writer’s methods to create
meanings
3)
Exploration of ideas/perspectives/contextual factors shown by specific, detailed links between
context/text/task
Q2)
High grade criteria/AO's
AO1
Scrooge’s fear of the appearance of the ‘Phantom’ and his response to it
Scrooge’s fear of what the ‘Phantom’ represents – he fears this ghost the most
Scrooge fears all the ghosts – and Marley’s ghost too
He fears an early and lonely death – thus leaving all his wealth and possessions behind – and the
coldness / darkness of the grave
He fears becoming poor
AO2
Language used to present the appearance and actions of the ghost
Language used to present Scrooge’s fear, eg ‘filled him with a solemn dread’
The build up of Scrooge’s fears – starting with Marley’s ghost and going through to the Ghost of
Christmas yet to come – all culminating in Scrooge’s spiritual re-education
How Dickens presents Scrooge’s fears during the appearance of any of the ghosts
AO3
Scrooge’s fear in relation to his redemption
Literary context – novel as an allegory
Use of the ghosts / ‘belief’ in ghosts to elicit fear in Scrooge / the reader
Ideas about fear as a motivating force