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Short Story Idea, What's the story about (Not finding love, Moving to…
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What's the story about
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Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter dont mind
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Not being able to express the way you love someone because on some situations that can be a bad thing for the relationship even if both of you love each other
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What do you do when you lose over and over again because you can't use the same force as your enemy and seeing injustice and viveza wins everytime
Young Adult Mages
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How the story Ends
The main character is heartbroken, and have to cope with the feelings of seeing how expresing himself cause a relationship to end.
Things went wrong and the character have to cope with the feelings of seeing how expresing himself cause a lot of problems
What if, si para proteger a una persona entra en pánico y libera todo su poder para derrotar al enemigo que tiene a la novia y cuando el personaje libera su poder para rescatarla termina matando a la novia también porque no pudo controlar lo que sentía
Backstory
Questions
Determinate, passionate
Su padre murio defendiendo una injusticia, y por eso el esta determinado a acabar con el ruler y cambiar todo.
Rebel?
Cuando murio su padre en manos de los "rulers" el decide que tuvo suficiente, conoce a alguien que lo introduce a la organizacion secreta y empieza a trabajar con ellos. A su madre le asusta esta desicion de su hijo pero lo entiende.
Wizard?
Hubo un evento que desperto sus abilidades, esto no es comun, pocas personas tienen estos poderes, hay distintos tipos de wizards cada uno con sus diferencias. El aun no entiende bien como funciona pero despues conoce a un mentor que le enseña
Smart
Es muy curioso, siempre le gusta saber el porque de las cosas y aprender de todo, eso hace que sepa muchas cosas y sepa resolver problemas, lee mucho
Near future
Un futuro cercano donde no hay mechas gigantes ni naves espaciales nada loco asi sci fi. es solo una sociedad desarrollada cerca de la realidad que tiene algunos aspectos futuristas, como gadgets, telefonos y la forma en la que funciona la ciudad.
Humble
Fue criado por su madre y de ella aprendio a ser humilde ante las situaciones, cuando se crio veia cuando otras personas de dinero o rango mas alto le hacian bullying a otros niños y pensaba que no era correcto hacer eso e intentaba defenderlo pero siempre terminaba golpeado. De ahi decidio que no queria ser ese tipo de personas.
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Sometimes characters gets what they need, no necessarily what they want
when describing something, describe how somethings feels intead of how it looks
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Story
A wizard rebel is tired of losing over and over again to injustice, manipulation, corruption, and abuse of power decides that he had enough and start taking actions by it's own hands and gets a group together of like-minded people to break the cycle and kick overthrow the rulers out
Character description
In current times/near future a smart 26 year-old wizard rebel of notorious for being one of the first rebels to actually confront the enemies and seen a slight victory, getting away with it makes some people start seeing him as a possible leader that could guide the other rebels to finally win and end the injustice. He is very determinate, passionate and very humble to everyone he meets. And now he finds himself in a situation where other people look at him like the possible solution to the problem and he is not prepared for that. He embarks on a journey with the help of others to prepare himself, make a plan, find a crew and overthrow the ruler.
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Start of a story could be someone on a bar drinking or smoking or doing whatever looking at the camera and saying.... Let me tell you what happened to me....
Dont avoid conflict find it and make an upcome that's unespected. allow the conflict to happend. make it so a conflict changes everythign!, test things. of the outcome
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The Characters discovers the rules of the world by making mistakes, dont tell the rules, show it
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To write comics he make notes about what's going to happend on each page, make a numbered list and describe wha'ts in each page with few words
He write a description for every panel and the dialogue, you can also write the camera placement or any ideas you have
before the script he makes a page sketch where you can visualize the amount of information a page or a panel can have
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dont focus on anatomy, just if the idea is coming across
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indirect reference is the bikers/mafia etc etc things related to that, that can add to the design