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Essay Q2 (CONCLUSION (the students now know that they are not that…

- - - - Linking sentence
        
        ms gruwell helped the students realise something they never realised before
      - Explanation
        
        it makes the students realise that other people also have the same problems as them
      - Topic sentence
        
        they are not any different from each other
      - Example
        
        the line game
      - Elaboration
        
        everyone has their own problems, some even the same as the others
  - - - Example
        
        the white kid was afraid of the black kids in the class before but has since changed when ms gruwell taught him
      - Explanation
        
        this shows his character development from being scared and anxious towards other races to becoming friends with people from the other race
      - Elaboration
        
        they do not feel uncomfortable or scared when they are with another race
      - Linking sentence
        
        ms gruwell has helped them to be more comfortable when interacting with the other races which can help them in the future
      - Topic sentence
        
        They are not racist towards other races
  - - - they are getting smarter
    - - this shows that they have
    - - they can continue their studies at good university or college
    - - the students that were supposedly at "risk" can get grades up to B