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Desperados MidDecember 2019 (ReDeliver 4096x2304 (4 des_019_060_065_gra…
Desperados MidDecember 2019
ReDeliver 4096x2304
4 des_019_060_065_gra_v001
5 des_019_070_075_gra_v001
6 des_071_090_cmp_v004 (16:9)
3 des_019_040_gra_v002
2 des_019_020_gra_v006
7 des_081_010_cmp_v005 (5.7k)
1 des_002_020_cmp_v005
055 (Sparks)
des_055_017_cmp_v014 [DONE]
Add another spark where she gets thrown back to show the spark sent her flying. You had the lightning bolt there before.
des_055_050_cmp_v014 [DONE]
Need more sparks at frame 1032 on shoulder back area (right shoulder). Frame 1055 on upper shoulder/back.
des_055_060_cmp_v014 [DONE]
Add spark at frame 1040 on right side of the head.
018 (Wedding
018x060 [DONE]
(Wedding wide with the crowd clapping for Jared and Wes). Can you make Jared 15% bigger so he bigger than Wes and taller?
071 (Goat)
des_071_020_cmp_v008 [DONE]
Dust shouldn’t disappear completely but fall away enough to see the goat
The dust in theory is created by the van that just passed by. But we don’t see the van? The dust should feel like a long trail
Basically, there needs to be dust behind the goat too so it covers up that there is not a van there, as well as not having the dust dissipate.
des_071_040_cmp_v014
Same logic here. There should be dust in front of the van like there is dust behind the goat.
des_071_050_cmp_v009
Dust in front of the jeep from the van here too.
des_071_060_cmp_v003 [DONE]
The rock would not shoot out the way you have it.
The rock needs to rotate
Spurts of the little rocks need to be replaced with explosive dust/debris
Slow down the big rock by 15%
Grass in front of the rock needs some disturbance added to show that a rock blew through it.
077 (Airport)
des_077_010_cmp_v008
Shot seems to be stuttering. Please look into this
Increase the intensity of illumination inside the letters and reduce glow outside the letters by 25%
des_077_030_cmp_v004
Nose on BG man is still cutting off.
See annotated frame
des_077_040_cmp_v008
Increase the intensity of illumination inside the letters and reduce glow outside the letters by 25%
des_077_050_cmp_v005
Screen right head needs the same screen left treatment for the hair
Hair looks too cut out.
See annotated frames