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LA- Team 4 Yuel (((eg. "NOO", suddenly,Shockenly,Abruptly,, more…
LA- Team 4 Yuel
eg. "NOO", suddenly,Shockenly,Abruptly,
more eg.---annoyingly,unfortunately
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even MORE eg. Strangely enough, somehow, concerningly,creeply
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Show DON´T tell eg. sad- tears welled up in her eyes surprised- his mouth fell open happy-he smiled widely angry- he lowered his eyebrows
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character, problem, solution
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flip the sentence eg. she has black shiny boots switch the sentence. Black boots glistened in the moonlight
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Don´t use: so, because, and, but, then, to start your sentence try using Red flag word/sentences
Describe the character, object and your setting (descriptive language) eg. Object was it heavy/light, colour, size etc charecter skin, clothes, tall/short etc setting smells tress animals cold/warm etc
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Queenies branch,Red flag words
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BOOM
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