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EOY English Rev. (Creative writing (Then you will have a choice of two…

- - - - Write a forum post for the school website, advising parents on what to pack for Year 7 camp.
      - OR
      - Write a speech for your classmates where you encourage them to take a holiday in Britain, instead of abroad.
    - - Vocabulary-
      - Spelling
      - Punctuation
      - Grammar
    - - Give multiple facts
      - Give expert opinions
      - Use powerful adjectives
      - Mention what ‘bad thing’ will happen if they don’t follow your ‘persuasion’
      - Use conjunctions
        
        Then
        
        Therefore
        
        Although
      - Repititon, get the idea into the reader’s head
      - Know your audience and relate to the reader
        
        Use specific pronouns, especially ‘you’.
        
        Similes!
        Metaphors!
      - Statistics
      - Humour
      - Anecdotes, make the reader have empathy and context
- - - - 1.First, you will have 2 easier questions, where you find information or explain in your own words. They may look like this:
        
        1b) Explain how the writer feels towards the dacnis.
        
        1a) Identify two quotations which describe the dacnis bird in paragraph 4.
        
        Pay attention to the questions. Read it!!
      - 2.Then you will have a comparison question. This should be quite simple if you read the question. Display what it tells you to show.
        
        2) Compare how we are expected to think about parrots with the experience of the narrator. Use a quotation to support 4 marks
        
        Connectives=comparative words
        
        On the other hand
        
        Also
        
        However
        
        Similarly
        
        Both
        
        Marks
        
        Comparative Comment 1 mark
        
        Quotation 1 mark
        
        Comparative Word 1 mark
        
        Detailed Comment 1 mark
      - More types of questions
        
        3.Then you will have questions to test your analytical skills. Read the question and see what the topic is. You should write one small paragraph for language and one for structure.
        We will expect: device names, evidence, exploration and discussion of what the reader gains.
        
        3) Explore how language and structure are used to present the experience in paragraph 5 to the end, starting ‘It was like…’. (6)
        
        6 marks!
        
        Use:
        Point
        Example
        Zoom
        Link
        
        4.Then you will have the biggest question: the evaluation. The question will give you a statement and you need to: explain how FAR you agree and give a reason why, provide evidence for this; explain how a reader feels; continually link to words of the statement.
        At the top end, we will expect to see multiple ideas. 10 marks
        
        ‘This is presented as a life-changing experience.’ How far do you agree with this statement?
        
        How much you agree with the statement and using measuring words
        
        Evidence to support your opinions
        
        The impressions of the writer on the reader
        
        You need at least 2 ideas explained
        
        You need to write two PEZL paragraph.
        I agree/disagree because …..
        
        Marks
        
        Point- 1 mark
        
        Evidence- 1 mark
        
        Zoom (analysing a word in the quotation)- 1 mark
        
        Linking back to the statement- 1 mark
        
        Making a detailed comment- 1 mark
        
        10 Marks!
        
        Use these words:
        Refers to
        shows
        implies
        presents conveys
        emphasises
        suggests
        indicates
        connotes
        exaggerates