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H for Hawk (Structure (Onomatopeia "thump" (Creates tension…
H for Hawk
Structure
Short sentences = tension/suspense/excitement/anxiety
Continues similes/metaphors=unique identity of the bird
Onomatopeia "thump"
Movement of the bird inside the box
Creates tension
Apprehension of the writer
"squinted in"
adds to the mystery of the hawk
Langauge and techniques
simile = "turkey in a butche's shop" = sad and pathetic image
short sentences = anxiety/concern
Complex sentences that tie several ideas
Contrasting sentence structures
Attitudes and values
p.4 Writer becomes caring towards the hawk, it is seen as vulnerable
The writer has to swop the bird she is assigned with another one
The changing of the bird shows courage and detrmination
Thoughts and feelings
Paragraphs 1-2
Sense of anticipation/concern/uncertainty
p.3 = cautious
p.3 concern for the hawk's welfare
p.7 §Anxiety about her assigned= this hawk is more sinsiter
"blank and crazy in her stare"
Para 3 "my heart jumped sideways" = metaphor
nervous/anxious about hurting the animal
Paragrapgs 1-2 Collecting the hawk
Paragraph 3 Hawk appears
Draws our attention to the nature of the hawk
p.4 The writer is given the hawk
p.4 = goes to when the hawk was a chick and how it was raised
Aware of her significance in the hawk's life
p.5 Realizes it's the wrong bird
Builds tension
p.7 Plea to excahnge birds
She wants the younger bird that she feels more comfortable
First bird younger and more vulnerable
fizzing and fusing with terror
highly actively/ taking in the new surroundings
Like a Victorian melodrama
Extreme emotion
This Hawk makes avery dramatic entrance
P.3 description of the hawk
reptile/fallen angel//conjuring trick/
enormous eyes
superiror species