Argumentative Essay Structure// ( Conclusion (The Challenge//3. Actively…
Argumentative Essay Structure//
The Challenge//3. Actively engaging in helping climate change activities, groups, or funding with your own community and town or where you're living is another step towards the big picture of slowing it down.
The Modified Thesis//2. Being aware of climate change is the first big step in how slowing it could happen, if there is a way to slow down the greenhouse effect and gases that could help tremendously, and policies and regulations are a great way to slow down what is happening with climate change.
The Modified Focus Statement//1. Climate change is creeping up on us, and it's not planning to slow down on its own.
The Thesis Statement//Having policies and regulations can work against the temperatures not climbing up.
3 Main Points
Point d. Everyone should be more aware of the effects of climate change and how it relates to greenhouse gasses, government policies and regulations that are trying to help, and how communities could help more.
Point C. Aware of the effects of climate change
Point b. Greenhouse gasses and effect
Point a. Policies
The Focus Statement//Scientists with NASA predicted that for this next century the earth's average temperature will rise from 2.23 to 10 degrees F. (Randal Jackson, 2019).
The Grabber//The world is starting to swelter, the earth's average temperature has already gone up 2.23 degrees.
Regulations are positive for Climate Change//
Paragraph 1//Being aware of the effects of climate change
The Introduction//This year's March was the third warmest March for the ocean and land average temperature, states NOAA March 2019.
The Acknowledgement//Next year’s March should not be the 4th warmest March, if the importance of the awareness of climate change and its effects rises. Most people are aware of climate change, just how much they’re aware, is the problem.
The Dispute//Climate change is something that should not just be put on the shelf and be ignored. Climate change is affecting everyone, not just a group of people, all the people.
The Concrete Detail//"March 2019 also marks the third time (2016, 2017, and 2019) that the March global land and ocean surface temperature departure from average surpasses 1.0°C (1.8°F)." (NOAA March 2019).
The Analysis and Evaluation//Warming is already on its 3rd year. The earth could have easily survived and thrived without humans. What we are doing, such as building, getting more energy for energy, making things, is killing the earth faster and faster.
The Conclusive Sentence//If the temperature and greenhouse gases continue to go up, the earth will continue to perish, but at a more increased rate.
Paragraph 2//Greenhouse effect
The Introduction//The greenhouse effect is something that is keeping this world warmer and warmer. The burning and use of coal, gas, and oil, or fossil fuels, for big industries making energy for more energy, or energy production, is a huge leading factor of the greenhouse effect. Greenhouse effect is what happens when gaseous mixture is in the atmosphere and gets trapped there. When it is trapped, it can hold in heat, which is typically what global warming is. Methane, carbon dioxide, and water vapor are a few other examples of the greenhouse effect, Rachel Ross Jan. 2019.
The Acknowledgement//Many of the gaseous mixtures comes from factories, companies, and industries. They are making things for the people of the earth.
The Dispute//How they are making what they are, is what's affecting this earth's atmosphere. The U.S. and China are the 2 greatest greenhouse gas emitters on this planet.
The Concrete Detail//"What’s abundantly clear is that the United States of America is the all-time biggest, baddest greenhouse gas emitter on the planet." . . . "China now emits more than the US" From Vox in 2015.
The Analysis and Evaluation//If there is another way to build and make what the factories and companies are making them and proliferate it, we can help with this greenhouse effect astronomically.
The Conclusive Sentence//The energy production has already made a huge impact in the atmosphere.
Paragraph 3//Having policies and regulations to help this little blue planet will help preserve it. Agreements for this is a good way to enforce regulations and policies.
The Introduction//Policies and regulations are a great way for countries to fight against climate change.
The Acknowledgement//Regulations can do good things for the climate, but the business can have a hard time keeping up with the regulations and policies.
The Dispute//Even though it can get hard for them, the benefits of the regulations on the climate are greater than the possible negative things that are going on with the business. This is something the world needs fighting for, the world.
The Concrete Detail//Or as NASA says, "Taken as a whole, the range of published evidence indicates that the net damage costs of climate change are likely to be significant and to increase over time."
The Analysis and Evaluation//The cost and work for climate change is still going up and will continue to go up. The work that is going on to help climate change are and what can happen can help significantly and improve so much for future generations!
The Conclusive Sentence//Funding and policies should be enforced everywhere. We aren't helping the world with nothing to give back if there is only taking.