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protesting against animal testing (essay introduction (3.the thesis…
protesting against animal testing
essay introduction
3.the thesis statement
3 main points
It’s archaic.
It’s unethical. it wrong
It’s wasteful.
final thesis
animal testing wrong because unethical archaic and it is wasteful
the focus statement
it is wrong to use animals to test on because they are like humans
the grabber animal testing is horrifying
according to peta.org as a results of animal testing ¨Each year, more than 100 million animals—including mice, rats, frogs, dogs, cats, rabbits, hamsters, guinea pigs, monkeys, fish, and birds—are killed in U.S.¨
essay body
paragraph 1
1 . topic sentence animal testing is unethical
2 . the acknowledgement some people dont think that animals have feelings but animals have feels animals feel ever thing that humans
3 . the dispute animals feel ever thing that humans
4 . the concrete according to phys . org Though animals cannot express their feelings linguistically, researchers have found that like humans, their emotions can be expressed through actions
5 . the analysis and evaluation even thought we cant see there emotion they get hurt and feel the pain we do
6 . the conclusive sentence animals can feel all the pain we can so we should not use them for testing
paragraph 2
1 . topic sentence using animals for testing is wasteful
2 . the acknowledgement the waste of life poison waste some people dont see animals getting they see drugs getting made we can use other things beside animals
3 . the dispute we can use other things beside animals
4 . the concrete ¨peta campaign to get animals out of laboratories has repeatedly shown the experiments to be wasteful and ineffective¨
5 . the analysis and evaluation there are million of animals that are being killed ever year because of testing and they don´t really get any thing out of it
6 . the conclusive sentence in conclusion there are million of animals being torched and killed
paragraph 3
1 . topic sentence animal testing is wrong because archaic
2 . the acknowledgement there are many people whos use animals to test on because it is easier than
using ai
3 . the dispute it is hard to get use to using to technology
4 . the concrete according to all-creatures .org ¨computers can predict the safety of chemicals better than animals testing and at much lower cost¨
5 . the analysis and evaluation using ai is faster better because they don´t have to sedated so it wont move and safer because it cant run away or bet anyone it is probably cheaper
6 . the conclusive sentence people should find new ways to testing animals because it archaic and wrong
essay conclusion
3 . the challenge
people should vote on animals testing
2 . the modified thesis statement these reasons involve it being wasteful, archaic and unethical
1 . the modified focus statement
there are many reasons why animals testing is wrong
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