Camp Memoir
(Stingray)

Jumping off the jetty into the cool water

Feel / Look

Moment in time

  • Language Features
  • Show not Tell
  • Present tense
  • 5 senses

5 W's and 1 H

When - Thursday / Fishing

Where - Wharf

What - Jumped off the Jetty

Why - We didn't catch any fishes and didn't get any bites.

Who - Emily and I

How - ??

Look

Feel (Outside)

Feel (Inside)

Butterflies

Shiver

Shiver down my spine

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Cold water

Clear blue water

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Dark shadow gliding across beneath me