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Term 1 Camp Moment in Time (5 W's and 1 H (When - 4 'o' clock,…
Term 1 Camp Moment in Time
5 Senses
Hear - I could hear the screams of kids as they jump off
See - I could see the bird poo all over the platform
Feel - I could feel the water splashing onto my face
Taste - I could taste my spit building up in my mouth
Smell - I could smell the salt coming off the water
Show not tell
Explain the colors and the shape of it
Explain what it's doing and how it behaves
Use the 5 senses to help you describe it
Describe what you see but never say what it is
Making it more Exciting
Use emotions to make it more real
Use suspension to make it more exciting
Use descriptive words to help the reader understand what the character is feeling
5 W's and 1 H
When - 4 'o' clock
Where - Camp Benson
What - Jumping of the pontoon
Why - To have fun
Who - Myself
How - running of the platform and landing in the water