2Lou by Dave Mullins(revised)

Character

Major

Minor

J.J.

Lou

schoolkids

J.J.`s bully

Setting

one morning

school yard

Conflict

J.J. does not want the kinds to be happy

Climax

J.J.remembered how he felt when someone look

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J.J. took back his backpack

Lou took the backpack

Lou showed J.J. his lost teddy bear

J.J. was taking

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Them

When you good things you con change:compassion is wealth