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i wanna be yours (Context (John Cooper Clarke, Performance Poet, Average…
i wanna be yours
Context
John Cooper Clarke
Performance Poet
Average Guy- Not rich-Working class
Kitchen Sink Genre- Ordinary
About someone who loves someone else so deeply and always wants them to be around
Themes
Love
Compassion
Loyalty
Relationships
Style
Forward
Repetitive
Informal
Personal
Tone
Personal
Passionate
Desperate
Poetic voice
Personal
Intimate
1st Person
Everyday language used
Simple
Imagery of everyday life- He wants to be with her everyday and do ordinary things (Domestic)
Seems childlike
Rhyme Scheme
Quatrain 1&2
A
B
A
B
C
C
C
D
Triple rhyme
First two stanzas consistent
Couplets
Quatrain 3
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
E
C
C
F
G
G
Rhythm changes in 3rd Quatrain
"Deep"
Adds emphasis
Symbolises heartbeat?
As does rhyme
More serious towards the end
More serious towards the end
No punctuation
No end-stopped lines
Heavily enjambed
Seems breathless
"i will never rust"
Never get old
Never get bored
Sex?
coffee hot
Electric meter + heater
Keep her warm
Anaphora
"Let me be"
Insistent
Pleading
Imperative
Needy
Demanding
Desperate
Dependent
Plosives
"Deep"
Volta
"i don't wanna be hers
Reassuring
Apologising
Rectify
Trying to convince her that he's changed
Refrain
"i wanna be yours
Conversational- Seems casual or relaxed
Not serious?
Repeated so reinforces ideas
Mostly monosyllabic
Powerful and direct
Gunverse Beat
Can be said quickly
Written to be preformed
"teddy bear"
comforter
"setting lotion"
Keep her together
Heavy use of Metaphors
Tetrameter + Trimeter becomes irregular in third stanza