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Women's Rights Violation - Coggle Diagram
Women's Rights Violation
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Context
This problem sounds simple and not important, but it is actually really important. We may not see this on our daily life but this is happening and really concerning.
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Content
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First of all, it is really concerning because it is one of gender equality. In the past, girls and women can not get education due to the gender equality. Even if these days girls and women can get education, this thing cannot be accepted in some country. They think that girls and women should not get a high education because they will end up become housewife. It is really sad to be discriminated. I believe girls and women can get proper education and work on they own. We women also can get money on our own to help the family. The problem continues as women get discrimination in the work. In some country, men get a bigger wage than women even if they work as harder as men.
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Another reason that we need to carry out the Women's Right is slavery. Although we cannot see much slavery around us, but it is really happening even in this current era. We cannot just ignore how miserable this problem is. The slavery starts from children to adult. They are given so much work to the point that overworked. They are not free to say what is in their mind. Also not being able to have their own privacy. At some point, they will get beaten for not doing their work as the boss wanted. This is need to stop because everyone deserves their own freedom.
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The slavery may not be the end of it because women also going through sex slavery. They are forced to use their body when they does not even want it. Beside the sex slavery, there are also lots of problem including rape. Even after raped, girls or women get judged in public. The social would like to blame them for using inappropriate clothes. In the fact, girls and women that get raped by men does not even use inappropriate clothes. They only use their school uniform and casual clothes. In the end, victims who get blame for something they do not want will be stressed and having mental health issue. In another country as example India, they even normalize rape. The rapist is usually their family or their neighbors. Can we imagine how stressful it is to be the victims? Actually we can prevent this problem happening because we believe that every human is given a brain and mind to think clearly to think which one is bad and which one is good.
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We can make a change. Let us begin from ourselves. We can educate ourselves by find out and take care about these things. We can also prevent something bad happen somewhere around us especially when it comes to our family and our friends. Of course we do not want anything bad happen to our dearest. When we start to aware about this, our environment will become better.
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Summary
We can support Women's Right to help girls and women get their own freedom. They also have the rights include the right to live free from violence, slavery, and discrimination; to be educated; to own property; to vote; and to earn a fair and equal wage.
Conclusion
These days, girls and women still stuck in something that they do not want. We must help girls and women to get their rights.
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Reflection
Although, all the problem looks solved in our country but it does not if we look more closely to the problems.
Prediction
This problem will always happen in the future if we do not start to aware about it from now on. It might be getting worse than it used to be.
Expectation
If we care of each other and eventually help people around us to educated themselves about this problem, our environment will actually get better than before.
Recommendation
When we already know about this, we need to implement this and support girls and women. It is really helpful to get even one support from other people.