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What are some advantages and disadvantages of student loans?
Organizing the essay
Parts of the essay
Introduction
main body
disadvantanges
advantages
conclusions
writer's opinion
Chunks
Nowadays/These days
Another issue is that/Another problem is that
All things considered/
Secondly
Writing conclusions
Formula
A general, one sentence summary
A focused summary of the main points
Something new/ your opinion
Example
not every thing on tv is bad, there are programs that could be complemented with the lessons that chilndren take in school.
In my opinion, today there are many channels where your children are safe, learning about gender discourse or recognize the value of the animals,etc. Only you need to go outside in real life with your children and practice the things that your girl sees on the screen.
All things considered,the tv could help parents during the growth of their children.
Writing introductions
formula
add and extra sentence to support the first
write a general sentece about the topic
tell the reader you plan
focus on the question in your own words
example
NoWADAYS, children spend a lot of hours in front the TV
young people don't have control about the hours that they spend with a device due to many parents needing to work long shifts.
is it possible that this behavior helps or hurts the little boys and girls?
in this essay I would like to write about this advantages and desavantages of this trend
Writing a topic sentence
Advantage
Learning through TV behaviors that your children have and understanding why your children in some moments are like they are
like a parent, while your children are watching TV, you can use this time in yourself
Disadvantage
that your children forget the importance of doing exercise or moving the body
lose the importance of establishing real relations to other children