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- - - - 短语
        
        【A】in an article celebrating the 28th anniversary of the founding of the Chinese Communist Party in 1949, Mao Zedong said...
        
        【B】in 1949, in an article celebrating the 28th anniversary of the founding of the Chinese Communist Party, Mao Zedong said...
      - 子句
        
        【A】we should also review our experience frequently and make adjustments in light of the actual conditions when we find problems
        
        【B】we should also review our experience frequently and, when we find problems, make adjustments in light of the conditions.
    - - 短语
        
        【A】after more than twenty days of exhausting marches and heavy combat, they reached the Dabie Mountains in late August.
        
        【B】they reached the Dabie Mountains in late August, after more than twenty days of exhausting marches and heavy combat
      - 子句
        
        【A】self-practice is important for all of them, no matter whether they will take up the career of teachers or serve as foreign relations personnel. Don't interfere with them when they manage to find time for self-practice.
        
        【B】whether they are going to take up the career of teachers or serve as foreign relations personnel it is important for all of them to practice by themselves, no matter Don't interfere with them when they manage to find time to do it.
  - - - 【A】In order to serve you better, please fill out a deposit slip before approaching the window.
      - 【B】To save time for the teller, please fill out a deposit slip before approaching the window.
    - - 【A】After years of effort, Gao said that soil erosion has been brought under control.
      - 【B】Gao said that after years of effort, soil erosion has been brought under control.
    - - 【A】Fortunately, by cutting the number of employees, the annual debt of the firm has decreased.
      - 【B】Fortunately, by cutting the number of employees, the firm has reduced its annual debt.
    - - 【A】Tall and shy, Diana's stylish gowns were recetly auctioned off for $5.7 million.
      - 【B】The stylish gowns of Diana, who was tall and shy, were recently auctioned off for $5.7 million.
    - - 【A】Using their military or peaceful means, most of the remaining enemy forces were put out of action.
      - 【B】Using their military or peaceful means, we put most of the remaining enemy forces out of action.
  - - - 【B】at last they have chosen their present political system and government. It was thanks to their efforts that the Chinese revolution triumphed. The revolution was certainly not imported from outside.
      - 【A】at last they have chosen their present political system and government. It was by their efforts that the Chinese revolution triumphed. It was certainly not imported from outside.
    - - 【A】that is the test of whether you are truly carrying out the decisions or just going through the motions, dragging your feet and perhaps even deliberately misinterpreting them.
      - 【B】that is the test of whether you are truly complying or just going through the motions, dragging your feet and perhaps even deliberately misinterpreting decisions.
    - - 【B】in African countries too, through the Organization of African Unity, demand with one voice is that no other country interfere in their internal affairs
      - 【A】in Africa too, the strong and common voice of the Organization of African Unity is to ask other countries no to interfere in their internal affairs
    - - 【A】Someone is bound to make trouble, but we must not let them cause serious disturbances.
      - 【B】Some people are bound to make trouble, but we must not let them cause serious disturbances.
  - - - 【A】this will help the authorities set prices that are appropriate not only for their own localities but also in relation to prices throughout the country
      - 【B】this will help the authorities set prices that are appropriate not only in relation to their own local conditions but also in relation to prices throughout the country
    - - 【A】"Seizing the Opportunity...""Accelerate the Reform and Open Wider to...""We must Create a Better..."
      - 【B】"Seizing the Opportunity...""Accelerating the Reform and Opening Wider...""Creating a Better..."
    - - 【A】Timber is needed for construction and to withstand floods
      - 【B】Timber is needed to provide material for construction and to help withstand floods
    - - 【A】just like the Crowne Plaza, all rooms feature an electronic door lock, a private safe, two telephones with IDD......
      - 【B】like the rooms in the Crowne Plaza, all those in the Holiday Inn feature an electronic door lock, a private safe, two telephones with IDD......
  - - - 【B】revitalizing the economy will be an arduous work
      - 【A】economic revitalization will be an arduous task
    - - 【A】silk undershirts are rich in elasticity
      - 【B】silk undershirts are highly elastic
    - - 【B】otherwise, we can achieve nothing
      - 【A】otherwise, there can be no achievement in our work
    - - 【A】it is important to give full scope to the role of experts
      - 【B】it is important to take full advantage of the knowledge and abilities of experts
  - - - While
        1) during the time that
        2) although
        3) but, by contrast
        4) and
        
        【A】The Chinese Communist Party put forward ... that we should establish a new China which would be ... "independent, free, democratic, united, prosperous, and powerful." While the Chiang Kai-shek clique stuck to the point that ... should still be kept in a semi-feudal, semi-colonial status...
        
        【B】The Chinese Communist Party put forward ... that we should establish a new China which would be ... "independent, free, democratic, united, prosperous, and powerful." The Chiang Kai-shek clique, on the other hand, stuck to the point that ... should still be kept in a semi-feudal, semi-colonial status...
      - With
        1) accompaniment
        2) agency
        3) characterization
        4) manner
        5) possession
        
        【A】It was with her leadership and negotiation skills that the customers were eventually compensated with 5 billion yen by the Japanese company.
        
        【B】It was thanks to her leadership and negotiating skills that the customers eventually received 5 billion yen in compensation from the Japanese company.
    - - 对比/对立
        Contrast / Opposition
        
        【A】I am a layman in natural sciences. As my trip to Shanghai coincides with your discussion of a ten-year plan for science, I'd like to avail myself of this opportunity to touch on a few questions.
        
        【B】I am a layman n natural sciences. But as my trip to Shanghai coincides with your discussion of a ten-year plan for science, I'd like to avail myself of this opportunity to touch on a few questions.
      - 递进/扩充
        Addition / Amplification
        
        【A】as a result of successive defeats, it lost large numbers of men, and morale continued to sink. The mood among the officers and men was defeatist and war-weary. The people in the KMT areas rose up in struggle, making the KMT army's rear area insecure.
        
        【B】as a result of successive defeats, it had lost large numbers of men, and morale continued to sink: the mood among the officers and men was defeatist and war-weary. Moreover, the people in the KMT areas rose up in struggle, making the KMT army's rear area insecure.
      - 因果关系
        Cause or Effect
        
        【A】private schools are in difficulty now because they can no longer rely on warlords and bureacrat-capitalists for financial resources as they used to. Their school farmland was dsitributed to peasants during the agrarian reform. The government should show concern for these difficulties.
        
        【B】private schools are having difficulties now, because they can no longer rely on warlords and bureacrat-capitalists for financial support, and because their farmland was dsitributed to peasants during the agrarian reform. The government should concern itself with these difficulties.
    - - 【A】In our system the public sector is the major sector of the economy and there are also other sectors.
      - 【B】In our system the public sector is the major sector of the economy but there are also other sectors.
- - - - 【B】these practices should be abolished
      - 【A】these practices should be totally abolished
    - - 【A】the impact of this will be quite huge
      - 【B】the imapct of this will be huge
    - - 【B】in these nine years the economy has grown stronger
      - 【A】in these nine years the national economic strength has increased
    - - 【A】to carry out unswervingly the Party's basic line of...
      - 【B】to carry out the Party's basic line of...
    - - 【B】imports of automobiles have declined sharply this year
      - 【A】imports of foreign automobiles have declined sharply this year
  - - - 【B】data should be correctly evaluated
      - 【A】data should be correctly evaluated and comprehended
    - - 【A】the editorial also calls for strengthening and building the Party
      - 【B】the editorial also calls for strengthening and expanding the Party
    - - 【B】even if problems do emerge, they can be easily solved
      - 【A】even if problems do emerge, they can be easily corrected or solved
  - - - 【B】our troops advanced slowly
      - 【A】our troops used the method of slow advance
    - - 【A】it is necessary to make great efforts to assimilate the achievements of other cultures
      - 【B】it is necessary to assimilate the achievements of other cultures
    - - 【B】they should carefully examine...
      - 【A】they should conduct a careful examination of...
  - - - 【A】following the realization of mechanization and electrification of agriculture
      - 【B】following the mechanization and electrification of agriculture
    - - 【A】promoting the cause of peaceful reunification
      - 【B】promoting peaceful reunification
  - - - 【A】the ongoing movement to eliminate counterrevolution in the society at large is different from the previous movements to suppress counterrevolution.
      - 【B】the ongoing movement to eliminate counterrevolution in the society at large is different from the previous ones
    - - 【A】The Communist Party of China
      - 【B】the Party, CPC
    - - 【B】we must adhere to the principle that the development of the economy should be based on science and technology, and that the development of science and technology should be geared to the needs of the economy. The two must be organically combined.
      - 【A】we must adhere to the principle that economic development relies on science and technology, while development of science and technology is geared to the needs of economic development, and promote the organic combination of science and technology with the economy
    - - 【A】this year we have issued one hundred million fen of government bonds, which has done much to withdraw currency from circulation and stabilize prices. However, we issued more government bonds than necessary
      - 【B】this year we have issued one hundred million fen of government bonds, which has done much to withdraw currency from circulation and stabilize prices. However, we issued more bonds than necessary