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“Prisons should be abolished in today’s society. They are an ineffective solution to avoiding crimes.”
Prisons create criminals. We pretend that locking them up and keeping them away from us is the solution, when that system is actually part of the problem. Prisons, far from becoming a solution, are part of the problem.
The prison does not reform or normalize the offender; Rather, it produces the opposite effect and classifies it as a failure.
Prisons are an old punishment method that needs to be improved such as everything else in this society, because they don't help with people's behaviour and improvment.
If criminals don't go to prison other people would be pushed to do crimes as to shoplift because of the lack of money they have, so we would have even more criminals.
If the prisons are abolished frrom today's society the criminals would as well keep doing crimes because they would be in freedom to do even worst ones because there would be no punishment at all.
If crriminals don't go to prison where they should go? They should go home without any punishment at all? Or they should be punished in another way? Or just let them free?
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