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Fair Wage for Essential Workers - Coggle Diagram
Fair Wage for Essential Workers
Introduction
Hook
you do agree that many people argued about fair wages for the essential workers around the world, don't you?
Counter argument
In contrast, many people underestimate the value of the essential workers by adding that those workers are nothing to compare with other famous workers as a matter of type of work.
Side of agreement
Every government or any aspect of companies in many countries should care about fair wages, especially for those who stood by us and who were providing assistance during the pandemic, and they must be prioritized than other workers in terms of wage.
intro the essay
Most of the people around the world fall into two groups, one with positive thoughts toward this argument and the other having negative thoughts.
Thesis statement
Well, essential workers have a great influence and effort on our society because of their loyalty of taking care of people's lives and helping people's problems by solving them legally.
Body P1
Supporting A1
Having a big roll in the community especially nowadays, because they have succeed to improve their presence during Covid-19 pandemic and until now.
Detail 1 (fact-logic)
The one who really improved his presence from the essential workers are the doctors and nurses in the hospitals, they are the one who saved many lives from this horrible virus, by spending days and months to treat the infected people.
Detail 2 (fact-logic)
Also, they are the one who are combating this virus by studying it in labs to accomplish a vaccine, to save the whole world from spreading it.
Body P2
Supporting A2
Some essential employees have governmental power to help many people for not being subjected to abuse by others, or the many bad things that happen to them in any situation that makes a citizen unsatisfied.
Detail 2 (fact-logic)
moreover, they have participated in evacuating people in many cities or other populated places during the Covid-19 pandemic, to prevent the virus from spreading among the people.
Detail 1 (fact-logic)
The same applies to police officers, because they are also the ones who devoted most of their time to risk their lives to protect their country from any internal danger, such as terrorism etc.
Conclusion
Restate counter-arg
& 1 refutation
While some people think that they don't deserve respect or any consideration on their hard work, their work is actually covered and more frequent than other workers.
Final thought
In the end, I really hope they get their right and fair wage, and I consider them my heroes, because they deserve to have that name.
paraphrased
thesis
In conclusion, essential workers are the best when it comes for their works, and they own the priority of treating them nicely because they deserve it.
Body P3
1 supporting point
for the opposite side
However, many people believe that a fair wage for essential workers is not really necessary to be alarmed by governments or other companies, they argue about their futile and unfamiliar work.
refutation 1
(with logical reasons)
In fact, their work helps and covers the needs of the population in terms of health, food supplies etc.
refutation 2
(with logical reasons)
There is no doubt that their work costs more responsibility and is more difficult to handle, and not everyone can handle, this is an illustration of how important it is.