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Kiswana
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Kiswana
Browne
Formalist Annotations
Setting
Kiswana has purposely chosen to live at Brewster Place which is seen as a less financially stable community. She has isolated herself from her previous identity because she feels that she was not doing enough for her community. This shows how her passion for gaining equal rights has created divisions between her self and her family. This self-isolation goes impacts her relationship with her mother.
Symbolism
Wind: The wind could be seen as the oppression that is seen as a result of racism. Kiswana's passion for equal rights for African Americans is supported by the wind as it is seen that the wind takes things away from people, whereas the pigeon is less affected by the wind compared to the people. This is a direct parallel to racism as how it oppresses certain groups of people and does not affect others. "A portly mailman...snatched from his head." This shows how the mailman was affected by the wind by it snatching his hat, whereas the pigeon, "beat its wings...opposite building." The pigeon landed safely, having not suffering any consequuences from the wind.
color: color can be seen as a symbol in this text as a contrast to the setting. Brewster Place is dull, broken down, and grey, whereas the people living there are more vibrant. Throughout the story, there is huge significance for color as it is one of the main focuses for the protagonist and one of the first things Kiswana notices about people is their skin color. "A tall copper-skinned woman"
Irony
It is ironic that Kiswana lives of the sixth floor where she can see "the trees from Linden Hills", her old neighborhood, from her window. This is ironic because Kiswana's entire purpose was to disconnet from her previous identity and isolate herself from her family and yet, she can see her old life everytime she looks out of the windows.
Obviously ironic that Kiswana needs to lok into a dictionary to find a name that makes her proud, when her actual name has more significance then she knew and is a better representation for what she is fighting about.
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Juxtaposition
Kiswana sees the juxtaposition in the fact that she can see Lindon hills from her window, whereas, she lives in this financialy unstable, deteriorating environment.
Psychological lens: the relationship between mother and children. Mothers are the first love.
Also looking at the fact that women compete. That show more relationship between Kiswana and her mother.
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Theme
Identity
Kiswana and her Mother's identities are both related and contrasting. While Kiswana believes that she does not belong in her mothers affluent neighbourhood because they are black, therefore living in a nice neighbourhood would make them whitewashed. Meanwhile Kiswana's Mother lives in this nice neighbourhood to "prove" that black people deserve an equal chance and can achieve great things. Kiswana has isolated herself from her previous identity because she believes that it does not represent her ethnicity and by rebelling, she is now struggling to find her new identity as she has yet to achieve the equal rights she so desires.
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Characterization
Mother
Motivation
Kiswana's mother ultimately wants to help Kiswana in any way she can, even though she refuses the help. Her motivation may be hard to see to Kiswana, as she sees everything as a confrontation. But her Mother just wants Kiswana to be safe and have a good life
Emotion
While it doesn't seem like it at first glance, Kiswana's Mother cares deeply about her identity. This is seen when Kiswana questions her devotion to her people, and the flood of rage that came over her while defending her choices and lifestyle to Kiswana
Actions
After Kiswana repeatedly refuses to take money for a telephone in her apartment, her Mother leaves money hidden in her couch. This way Kiswana could not refuse her help. Additionally this phone would help Kiswana stay in touch better with her mother, revealing her intentions are good but she struggles to convey them some of the time.
Dialogue
Kiswana's Mother lives in an affluent neighbourhood, and therefore has done her best to "fit in" by speaking with more intelligent diction choices and using reason in her arguments. whereas when they were arguing about Kiswana's future, Kiswana used accusation and emotional manipulation, while her mother stayed calm for the majority.
Relationships
Kiswana's Mother is continuously fighting for a relationship with her daughter, since she is said to be always coming to visit Kiswana. She struggles between being too protective over her daughter, since she simply wants the best for her. Although in the text this comes across as snide remarks about Kiswana's living situation and aspirations.
Kiswana
Motivation
Kiswana is partially motivated by her mothers opinion and making her proud. Although she seeks her mothers approval, she doesn't want to be like her Mom. She desperately wants to break free of her middle class family, and stop conforming to white idealism. By changing her name from her "white" name she is revealing her motivation to be
Actions
She does not conform to societal norms in regards to race and femininity. When with her Mother she becomes more aware of this when she tries to act "elegant" crossing her legs and speaking like the people she watches on TV
Dialogue
Compared to her Mother, Kiswana speaks much more casual. This is evident when the two are speaking to each other about her sister-in-laws pregnancy. While her mother explains beverly is "expecting", Kiswana prefers to use the phrase "knocked up". This helps to show the reader the contrast between Kiswana and her Mother, and perhaps how Kiswana feels that she is different and doesn't belong to the life she was raised into.
Relationships
Growing relationship with her mother. It seems like both of them are trying hard to get along with the other one and avoid conflict. You can see this in Kiswana cleaning her apartment before her mom gets there to avoid a fight.
Emotion
Kiswana experiences a range of emotions that control her choices throughout the text. Firstly when her mother first arrives at her home, she is self conscious about her living space. As seen as the way she frantically puts away her messes, hoping a clean and orderly living space would earn respect from her mother.