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Fair Wage for Essential Workers - Coggle Diagram
Fair Wage for Essential Workers
introduction
One side agree with
essential workers work in dangerous jobs in the country in particularly during pandemic coronavirus situations.
One side do not agree with
However, essential workers have low qualifications.
Essay topic
Around the world, there are many people have different opinions about the benefits and disadvantages of raising the essential workers salary.
Thesis statement
They faced a lot of challenges
Their jobs are significant in our society.
Hook
Do you agree with raising the essential workers salary?
Body argument 1
essential workers faced a lot of challenges
they are in conflict with coronavirus
they work under high pressure
2 or 3 examples
Body argument 2
Their jobs are significant in our society.
They service us in many other things such as delivery, and cooking.
Cleaners keep our surrounding clean
2 or 3 examples
counter argument
1 supporting point for the opposite side
They have a low qualification
2 refutations
essential workers cannot gives any value for people.
Their work does not require any conditions and qualification to pass it
Conclusion :
Restate counter argument and 1 refutation
Basic workers have low qualifications
They cannot gives the society any benefits
Final thought:
Paraphrased thesis
Essential occupations should take good salary because of they are In the foreground, and their jobs are important in our life.