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Fair wages for essntial workers - Coggle Diagram
Fair wages for essntial workers
Body paragraph 2: introduce the second supporting argument:
there will be a lot of people applying for a job and there will be a lot of workers
raising the salaries until the essential work becomes in demand
work will affect the country if nobody does it
the country will be benefited from the huge workers instead of them being unemployed and a burden the country
improve the quality of the work
Body phragraph 1: supporting argument 1:
it will give them more incentive to work more hours and be committed to their work
it will give them motivation to do better and well in their job
they will like their job more than before and do not quit it.
it will get them satisfied and attached to their work
conclusion
summarize the paragraph
give my final thoughts as the benefits outweigh its drawbacks
restate the topic
Body paragraph 3: counter-arguments:
if the country gives all the employers a high salary it will lose a lot of money
the country's economy will decline from spending too much money on a few employees.
people think that it is difficult for the country to raise the salary for each worker in difficult times.
one high employee salary could be for many people
there are some jobs that deserve a high salary due to its diffculty
if the country raises the salary the worker will work hard and that will make the country successful and its economy will grow more
introduction:
sentence 1-3: introduce the topic. sentence show one side. one sentence show other side.
sentence 4: thesis statement. mention topic and 2 supporting argument to your point
reduce their poverty
work long hours , very hard
they give their most of time worikng in this job
for example, they may give the work their time more than they give a time for their family and children so the may rearly see them because of the hard work
they may came from a farway country to work this job
the government should raise the essential worker's salary because it will compensate the worker for their very hard work and it will improve the quality of work.