The Case for the Defence
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If you had reported as many murder trials as I have, you would have known beforehand what line he would take. And I was right, up to a point.
This was not one of those cases of circumstantial evidence in which you feel the jurymen`s anxiety -because mistakes have been made - like domes of silence muting the court.
But before he moved away, he had looked up - at her window.
Mr Wheeler...was wakened by a noise - like a chair falling - through the thin-as-paper villa wall...
the man you saw ... was the prisoner - and not this man, who is his twin brother?
Question in the narrative
And the brother? He had his alibi, too; he was with his wife.
But whether - if he did the murder and not his brother - he was punished or not,
Divine vengeance? I wish I knew.
Rhetorical questions
But if you were Mrs. Salmon, could you sleep at night?
He was even dressed the same - tight blue suit and striped tie.
Polysyndeton
The fatal instinct that tells a man when he is watched exposed him in the light of a street-lamp to her gaze - his eyes suffused with horrifying and brutal fear, like an animal's when you raise a whip.
And old Mr Wheeler, who lived next door to Mrs Parker, at No. 12, and was wakened by a noise ... , and got up and looked out of the window,
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In Laurel Avenue he had been seen by
yet another witness - his luck was badly out;
One of them - no one knew which - said, "I've been
acquitted, haven't";
parallel construction
"They told me that whatever I wished for - whatever I wanted - "