The Case for the Defence

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If you had reported as many murder trials as I have, you would have known beforehand what line he would take. And I was right, up to a point.

This was not one of those cases of circumstantial evidence in which you feel the jurymen`s anxiety -because mistakes have been made - like domes of silence muting the court.

But before he moved away, he had looked up - at her window.

Mr Wheeler...was wakened by a noise - like a chair falling - through the thin-as-paper villa wall...

the man you saw ... was the prisoner - and not this man, who is his twin brother?

Question in the narrative

And the brother? He had his alibi, too; he was with his wife.

But whether - if he did the murder and not his brother - he was punished or not,

Divine vengeance? I wish I knew.

Rhetorical questions

But if you were Mrs. Salmon, could you sleep at night?

He was even dressed the same - tight blue suit and striped tie.

Polysyndeton

The fatal instinct that tells a man when he is watched exposed him in the light of a street-lamp to her gaze - his eyes suffused with horrifying and brutal fear, like an animal's when you raise a whip.

And old Mr Wheeler, who lived next door to Mrs Parker, at No. 12, and was wakened by a noise ... , and got up and looked out of the window,

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In Laurel Avenue he had been seen by
yet another witness - his luck was badly out;

One of them - no one knew which - said, "I've been
acquitted, haven't";

parallel construction

"They told me that whatever I wished for - whatever I wanted - "