"Wow, such a smooth presentation Hari. I am impressed. You present well compare to your previous video that you have recorded. Keeping presentation focused on key and body language is important and you did a good job at it".

"your speed is appropriate with good language skill and content was relevant. You have improved your eye contact and most important is during the presentation you are confident while speaking which you nailed it."

"From my point of you, you have improved your eye contact with audiences and you able to keep your presentation focosed on key agenda items which are easy for the audience to follow and understand. Great Job! As always your body language, gesture and voice are well portrait in an effective manner.

In my opinion, you need some improvements in your presentation. You also can change for better attire so your talk can be visually appealing as well

. As your weakness, you need to maintain your eye contact with your audiences

"improvement and you speech are fluent with good command of language skill."

"speed '
"improvement and you speech are fluent with good command of language skill"
"voice was clear and loud enough maintain good eye contact with the audience'