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写作语法 (状语从句 (1 限定时间 (After they finish school,...
...until we are…
写作语法
状语从句
1 限定时间
After they finish school,...
...until we are basically prepared to face it
while sometimes people ... , in most cases ...有的时候... , 大部分时候...
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3 限定条件 (假设)(一般主将从现)
If/when their children work hard at school,then they will...
If they can not play make-believe games,how can they...
4 让步关系 (虽然)
Although/While some people link happiness to wealth...典型状从
Despite the constant increase in the number of cars,介短做状语
although/while+从句，despite+介词短语
5 伴随关系 (随着)
As the number of teenage criminals increases, many people...
As access to the best education and best jobs is becoming more...
as+从句，with+介词短语
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谓语动词错误
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2 太多动词谓语混乱
Adults choose :red_cross: live with their parents.动词只能一个
Adults choose to live with their parents. :check:
3 时态问题
In the past,people were write :red_cross: letters...
In the past,people wrote letters... :check:
4 被动错误
Money :red_cross: spent on education,少必动词
Money is spent on education. :check:
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主语多样化
1 基本名词
Young people, Young adults, Parents, The main concern
,A child, Sports professionals, The amount of money
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5 抽象名词短语
interest in sport is... , Poverty in many countries... , The increase in human lifespan... , The pursuit of a decent salary...
修饰名词
1 普通形容词+名词
a 坏的方面
stressful working conditions, mental diseases, immature minds, negative/ adverse effects, grave problems, hard economic realities
b 好的方面
traditional skills, valuable experience, bright job prospects, a decent job, sufficient free time, physical co-ordination, mature minds
c 中立角度
fierce competition/objection, a universal phenomenon, rare occasions, the general population, virtual world, on a global scale
2 分词形容词+名词
a 单一分词形容词
conflicting views, working parents, smoking parents, dying languages, disappearing arts, declining level of health...
b 复合分词做形容词
labor-saving devices, time-consuming tasks, self-interested people, law-abiding citizens, money-related happiness, carbon-based energies
c 必背的4个复合形容词
健康相关的问题health-related problems, 动物相关的产品 animal-related products, 基于网络的购物 internet-based shopping,蔬菜为主的饮食 vegetable-based diet
3 名词+(介词短语)
a 普通的介词短语
food from local farms, children from poor families, children with a lot of toys, countries with rich tourism resources
b 特殊的介词短语
长得像动词
people against animal testing, parents against giving children money, parents in favor of home schooling knowledge beyond textbooks, development beyond people's imagination
5 名词+定语从句 (修饰主)(修饰宾)
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b 对整个句子的延伸修饰
Children are... ,which is the reason why they...
Each city or town is... , which means that they have to ...
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比较级最高级错误
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动词在前，than在后
Robots than human worker shave higher... :red_cross:
Robots shave higher... than human worker :check:
比较级前少了必动词is
Nuclear energy :red_cross: more efficient than fossil fuels.
Nuclear energy is more efficient than fossil fuels. :check:
The cost of food two times more than clothes. :red_cross:
The cost of food is twice as much as that of clothes. :check:
最高级要加定冠词
Reading is one of :red_cross: most popular daily activities for many people.
Reading is one of the most popular daily activities for many people. :check:
介词的用法
1 介词+名词
Because of the high price,
2 介词+doing
Without leaving their house,
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主语错误
1 动词原形做主语
Go :red_cross: to university is .../Give :red_cross: children money is...
Going to university is.../Giving children money is... :check:
2 完整句子做主语
Young people study aboard can :red_cross: get benefits.
Young people who study aboard can get benefits. :check:
3 介词短语做主语
By :red_cross: inviting international companies can help ...
Inviting international companies can help... :check:
4 不带主语
In some countries :red_cross: can receive free education.
In some countries, people can receive free education. :check:
名词错误
1 可数不可数错误
students,rules,messages,books :check:
2 单复数错误
money,time,people不加S,Many people :check:
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