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Should the driving age be raised to 21? (Point 2 teen and young adults…
Should the driving age be raised to 21?
Point 2 teen and young adults need to go places
Topic Sentence
teen and young adult have to go places
Example
teens have to drive to work
Example
teens need to drive to School, if their parents are going to work
Example
teens need to help their parents
Concluding Sentence
teen and young need to use cars more than Adults
Point 3 - teens and young adults need independence from their parents before age 21
Example
young Adult need to get prepared for their life as a adult
Example
example
their parents will get tired of driving them everywhere
Concluding Sentence
topic Sentence
Point 1 - its important that they improve and learn over the years.
Example
After 21, your brain stops developing and it is not as easy to learn as when you are young.
Example
Example
Getting a Learners at age 14 gives you more practice
Concluding
learn new stuff and
topic Sentence
its important that they improve and learn over the years.
intro
hook
Did you know that more than 60% of car crashes are caused by drunk drivers, not young drivers?
Gen. Info
People think that young drivers are bad
driver is a
thesis
People think that young drivers are the worst, but it's not about the age, it's the skill. People are biased because they think that young drivers got drunk or don't know how to drive.
Concluding
Summarize Point 1,2,3
Concluding Sentence
Restate Thesis