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Elements of a Story (CHARACTERS (Georgie (love interest / likes boats /…
Elements of a Story
CHARACTERS
Georgie
love interest / likes boats / really short for his age / easily embarrassed / loves yellow--has a yellow jacket he really cares about / younger brother of Bradley
Penny
bright red hair / very pale / likes soft + fluffy things---wears sweaters and soft pants and things with puff balls, has a teddy bear collection / frizzy long hair / no confidence / doesn't' think they are good enough
Ricard
smart alec / talks back to everyone / invasive / can't keep a secret / horrible fashion sense / friends with Bradley
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Bethanny
tries her best / bullied a lot / close friends with Penny / hipster-y / underrated / very supportive
Bradley
brother of Georgie / has a stutter / looks like an egg wearing a toupee / basically young Vladmir Putin / brave / has tunnel vision when he sets his mind on a goal / does his best
Eduardo
germ freak / cooties jokes / sometimes uses the wrong word for things / borderline annoying / nerd / argyle sweaters the person
PLOT
Idea: Romantic Comedy short story where two dorks fall in love with each other and chaos ensues as their friends all try and help them get together/find out about them. Georgie and Penny get 'caught red handed' when they finally kiss.
Beginning: Georgie arrives at his new school on the first day. In his first class, Georgie becomes friends with Penny. Penny offers a spot in student council. Georgie thinks she's pretty.
Middle: Penny begins to grow feelings
for Georgie too. There are several moments where their friends try to tell Penny and Georgie that they have a crush on each other, but they always seem to be interrupted or something. There are numerous times when they seem they will almost confess, but they cannot find the right time.
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SETTING
school
main setting / hallways / classes (maybe science or Spanish, they're kinda boring and would be ones where the charas. would sneak glances at each other) / kind of messy but warm school-- think schools from Drake & Josh, iCarly, That's so Raven
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CLIMAX
It's before lunch. Penny thinks everyone is gone and confesses that she like Georgie. They both talk about how much they like each other. It is then revealed that a HUGE number of kids saw the thing play out in the hallway. It's quite embarrassing
CONFLICT
Penny and Georgie both like each other but keep comically never finding the right time to confess and keep ending up in romantic situations. Also the friends are doing cartwheels trying to get Penny and Georgie together