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(Band 6 (2-5) (wrong style, lacks structure (paragraphs, 1-2 attempts at…
Band 6 (2-5)
wrong style
lacks structure (paragraphs
1-2 attempts at language techniques
so many errors many i can hardly read your paper
Band 3 (14-17)
right for right audience
structure is in place and works
language techniques
some errors but able to read
Band 2 (18-21)
right form right audience
structure is in place and works
language techniques are used correctly
some errors but able to read
Band 1 (22-25)
Right form and audience engaging paper with clear voice
structure is so good that there is no obvious room for improvement
Band 7 (0-1) wrote the wrong paper
Paper has so many errors it is unreable
wrote the correct style
large number of errors but i can read it
supporting details dont tiie to main ideas
tried multiple times with the language techniques