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Rites of passage (Setting (Scene 2 (Midnight, External, Empty street,…
Rites of passage
Setting
Scene 1
External
Morning
Park
Scene 2
Midnight
External
Empty street
Internal
Internal
Home
Library setting
Scene 3
Dreamy
Evening
External
Abandoned school
Scene 4
Internal
Library
Scene 5
Internal
Home
Plot
Scene 3
Dream state
In his dream, he rise up from the floor
He woke up to somewhere an unfamiliar place
Appearance
Resembles a school campus
Abandoned
Quiet
He observes the surroundings
Walking around the hallway
Curious
The room
He entered in to each of the doors and it led him a room that looks like a "classroom like" place
It consists of objects that are valuable and meaningful too him and a lit candle
His childhood picture, toys and his graduation gown
What caught his attention
What he encountered
He saw a person with white mask appear from the corner
Snuff out the candle and disappear
He felt confused
The mask person revealed to be his own self
Inside is a room
Scene 4
Wakes up
He wakes up from the dream
Calms himself down
Thinks about his dream
He decides to carry on with the job application
Scene 5
Acceptance
Few days later
He had a job interview
Manage to get the job
Realisation
His has a strong fear of changes
Accept that he is growing up
To live on as an adult
Scene 1
Introduction
Graduation
University
Park
Having a photoshop
Friends and families congratulate him
Unaware of his future
Scene 2
After 1 year of graduating
He became lonely and anxious towards himself
Realisation of his life decision
Questions himself
Felt left out from his peers
Most of the main character close friends are working
He feels self conscious and insecure
They indirectly rejects to meet up with him
They are busy with their working life
Cope up
Looking at his pictures from his highs school
Nostalgia
Happiness
Night drift
Contemplation to apply a job
A result from his frustrations
Mid way from applying
He stops and gave up
Anxiety
Procrastinating
He prefers his care free and relaxed life
Then falls asleep
He is still unemployed
He refuses and avoids work
Hard time accepting his transition to adulthood
He hates the idea of working and how the society keeps emphasising on it
Concepts (Techniques & Methods)
Symbolism
Candles
Colour Orange
happiness and positive memories
Warmness
Representation
The bright and vivid memory
Reminiscing
Longing
The room
Revisiting
Each significant memory to him
School Life
Childhood memory
Memories of his friends and family
"Returning back to the rooms"
Strong attachment
Strong desires from his past
Stubbornness
Empty school
Strip off its main features
Ordinary building
Point of view
1st Person
Will revolve around the Red's life
moral
"There is no easy way out. But, to accept the fate."
Metaphors
Dream
The reflection of what he is going in his reality
Inner-conscious state
The mask person revealing
Representation
Face the truth
Something that he suppress from the dark (black colour)
Why him?
Fooling himself
He is the one holding himself back
To have a sense of realisation
Learn more about himself
The ending
candle snuff
He moves on from the past
Theme
Sloth
The seven deadly sins reference
Definition
Unwillingness
Laziness
Self centred
Social issue
SCMP
2008 to 2015
Only 38 % with fresh graduate with a degree could get professional occupations
HK
Trading Economics
Hong Kong Youth Unemployment Rate
Average from 1993-2018
5.5 % of youths are unemployed
Pop culture
HK socially withdrawn youths ("Fei Qing")
Characters
Main Character
Protagonist
Refuses to take his responsibility and notgrow up after graduating
Always fantasises to be young again
Refuses to let go of his past
Love living in the past
Longing for attention
Always stay in his safe zone
Lonely
Always seen alone
Always want to feel the presence of people around him
Background
Age
20's
Sex
Male
Fresh graduate
Personality
Pessimistic
Stubborn
lazy
Undergoing a quarter life crisis
Mask Person
Antagonist
First appearance
In the main character's dream
Will be spotted on each of the room when the main character enters in
Appear from the corner of the room
Appearance
Will be wearing a white mask
Black clothes
Purpose
Spirit Guide
Snuff out the candles in the rooms
To make him realisation & acceptance to his fate