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Brainstorm (Audiences (Teens/ High school students, Aged 13-18, People who…
Brainstorm
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Plot Outline
Opening: 1800s shows Jane as a child being taught kindness
Flashes to modern day with Eloise slamming her bedroom door in frustration (argument with parents?)
Development: Elise's life, school, her friends, being a bit of a bully
When walking home she sees a girl in a dress run around a corner
Eloise sees brief moments of her over the next few days
At Train station sees the girl fully. Its Jane now a teenager, who looks the same a Eloise, train goes past and the two vanish
1850s
Jane and Eloise meet and Jane teaches Eloise to be kind and changes her view on life
Resolution: Eloise returns home and wants to know why her and Jane look alike
Gets down an of family photo album and see a picture of Jane, with the message she has told Eloise written on the back of the photo
Characters
Jane
From 1850s
Kind, Giving, Thoughtful, Loving
Eloise
2018 teen
Snob, Drama queen, doesn't care, wants everything her way
Lighting
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Low Key Lighting when Eloise is by herself, so show her vulnerability and she is weak even though she 'doesn't care about anything'
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