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Atlantis (Perspective of the Storyteller (Completely Unrelated Narrator …

- - - - How the event unfolds:
        
        Wire is connected to the old man as he dives into the water. This is the only thing connecting him to the boat and the way to save him from his own demise.
        The old man dives rapidly, crushing his inner organs. Old Age has also made the man weak. Does not drown, due to being pulled up of the water.
        Scene of visions and ending dialogue ensues.
      - Realization of drowning leading to knowledge about Atlantis
        
        Fake news is where he learned of how he thinks you get to Atlantis. That refugees kill thyself in order to get to Atlantis
        
        Witnessed someone drowning in the Atlantic Ocean years ago, at their deathbed they talked about visions of Atlantis. Doubt prevented the attempt himself, but in old age he is at the end of his rope and desperately searches for an answer through this method.
    - - By the end of story the man gives the money to the companion in an envelop containing the money and a note of thanks and a condition given either to keep Atlantis a secret or tell the story to anyone who is willing to listen.
  - - - Encounter with a compassionate man
        
        Old man sits at a bar and is muttering to himself, seems to be at the end of his rope.
        Is approached by a young man that inquires about what his issues are. The young man has the ability to help the Old Man, by bringing him out to sea.
        After a diologue in which the Old Man realizes that he has the chance to test the theory of drowning, he gets his help to get out to the sea.
        The companion does not know of the plan of the Old Man.
        
        Crucial to this event, is that the Old Man needs to have a realization, or a specific tipping point during the story that leads him to making the choice of doing the experiment.
      - The Beggar who needs money
        
        The Old man encounters a beggar, and with a small random epiphany, he asks the beggar to help him to get out to sea.
  - - - Suicidal Inclinations The Companion finds evidence that leads to the realization that the Old Man has suicidal thoughts.
        Medication pills, blooded knife, suicidal note, or a small document in which the Old Man tells of his struggles, and how he is at the ends of his rope.
      - Realization of depression The companion realizes that the Old Man is struggling and wants to help him to solve his issues.
        Confrontation between the two leads to an emotional dialogue in which the Old Man tells of his issues.
- - - - Start: Gathering of the Archeologist and companion, talk of the legend, decision to venture out to sea.
        Middle: Extensive talk about Atlantis, information is given towards proof and counterproof, discussion ensues between Archeologist and Companion. Diving deep fast and drowning brought up as a solution. Struggles regarding the suicide ensues.
        End: Dialogue between the two, Archeologist speaks as if he was in Atlantis.