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writing (trapped) (Reason (trapped by weather (fire, flood, wind), left…
writing (trapped)
Reason
left behind when family moved
trapped by weather
fire
flood
wind
cavers traped underground
flash back
three days before
two days before
1 hour before
describe room you are in
sights
dark, small
smells
damp basement
sound
can you hear traffic, pipes etc.
adding tension
strong verbs, adjectives
the clammy walls close in on me like an angry pair of hands
short sentences
punctuation such as - or !
I ran - I could see the edge of the ocean