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Radical change in my appearance and behavior. (New School (New People…
Radical change in my appearance and behavior.
New School
New People
Different school society
Superficial people
Avoid being bullying by them
Kind people
Tried to be friends with them
Rejected students
Didn't want to be rejected like them
New environment
Difficulty to make friends
Bought new clothes
Changed my look
New hair cut
.
More confident about myself
Got rid of my extreme shyness
.
New me
My life got better
My social life got better
Entirely new personality
Did more exercise
Became happier with my appearance
Started to talk more
People started to know who I was
Got more involved in my school
Sports activities
Made good friends
Events
.
Those friends became my family
.
Study groups
.
Purpose: Inform the audience
Audience: Friends, family and acquaintances that didn't know how I was before middle school.
Thesis statement: During my middle school years I had a radical change in my personality and appearance because I wanted to be happier with myself, and as a result I became more confident and my social life got better.