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Walking is good for the heart. To often we see it as a sinister activity…
Walking is good for the heart. To often we see it as a sinister activity
Ethos
" In “Laudato Si’,” published just over a year ago, Pope Francis stresses..."
Ken Ilgunas, the author of Trespassing Across America, recently wrote in The New York Times"..."
"Mr. Ilgunas, citing the advocacy group Smart Growth America, writes that more than 47,000 pedestrians.."
"New Jersey legislators are now working on a proposal..."
"According to a recent Washington Post story..."
"anthropologist Margaret Mead..."
"This spring, the city council of St. Louis Park, Minn..."
Pathos
"We need to fight the perception that walking ..."
"This hostility toward walkers is a public health issue."
"it literally kills people..."
Logos
"There are physical, psychological and spiritual benefits to exploring our world on foot"
"But over the past century, many have come to see pedestrians as suspect..."
"In 2011, a Georgia woman was convicted of vehicular manslaughter..."
"Many new families can afford only to rent in apartment..."
"Teenagers on sidewalks seem to be a particularly..."
"According to a recent Washington Post story..."
Problems
Lack of pathos
Need more emotios, put more feelings to convince more the reader
Claim
"We need to fight the perception that walking in public is a sinister activity, and we need to preserve common space where all can encounter nature and meet their neighbors"