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And All My Days (Samson's Dad Hires Antares (Adventure! (Premonition…

- - - - Bryn Officially goes missing
        
        Antares is caught by the Unseelie
        
        Antares in the Unseelie Court
        
        Samson and Adona Travel in Time
        
        Rowdy Boys Split Up / The Emissary Continues to Visit Antares
        
        Hunt The Emissary
        
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        ) Eventually Samson and Adona split - Samson goes to find Jol (and learns about the details of Bryn's deal with the fae and how he rescued Jol) and Adona goes to find Antares (and ends up finding Tamlin and learning about Kaihua's deal)
        
        Samson and Adona are heading to the mountains to meet with Bryn's parents. Things are quiet and solemn between them. . Possible stress and arguments happen, but at the end they end up sitting down with Dhil. Samson starts telling a story when Dhil asks what makes him think Bryn can even be found - that he's not dead - after hearing Samson's recount of the events
        
        Samson starts explaining, "when we got back, to where we agreed to meet, he was there, but he was...." and then gets to, "when we buried him we..." and then repeat the images of them burying him before, but with Samson's explanation / narration over it, culminating in, "what we found at the meeting place, that wasn't Bryn" and the reveal of the shot we left out of inside the grave. (chapter end, lmao)
        
        Near the beginning of Antares being taken by the Queen but not the exact beginning. Probably some relative time stuff / montaging equivalent. His weapon being forged, a Revel, the golden chain, the Iron circlet, his eventual like... completion as The Knight.
        
        Antares is allowed some freedoms, he starts being sent out on Hunts, he gets sent on missions and to deal with stuff that is not within the court's walls. Sometimes he is even allowed to leave on his own (as long as he returns by a certain time? only when given permission?)
        
        While out in the forest one day, he fucking just... runs into "Bryn". This is... terrible. Antares is shook. He is convinced this is either a new level of torture / senseless cruelty from the queen or he is finally well and truly losing his entire mind.
        This is when The Emissary first meets Antares. They are fascinated, and even more fascinated by Antares' seemingly conflicted and VERY intense feelings over the whole matter
        
        Antares especially thinks The Emissary showing up might be a trick because we are terrible people who are going to make a weird scene where he has to fight a faery glamoured to look like his friend
        
        oopsies
        
        Antares is up north and like, just being sad and terrible to himself. And a Fae finds him and he's like, weak from not taking care of himself and from mental and emotional exhaustion, and it ends with the Fae saying something ominous to him and him like passing out in the snow or something
      - The boys try and find him, track(?) him to Hell Forest, where they (meet Bryn's parents? learn that they moved?) and find a token of Bryn's that manages to convince them that he's probably dead (Adona doesn't want to give up hope, and Samson goes along, but Antares just....gives up? and goes home)
        
        at the point where they find this clue, he has been missing for so long (so much longer than usual) that they decide to actually search for him this time. Antares leaves a message behind telling Bryn to meet them somewhere in like a certain amount of time. After they find something of his and everyone is kindddd of losing hope
      - Antares freaking out like, if they find something of his with blood on it or hear a rumor that makes him think this time he's gone, "he's gone, we're never going to find him."
        And Adona being like, "no!!! He always comes back- I'm sure he'll... he'll come back Antares. He always does!"
        And Samson, angry at all of this happening because he doesn't know how to deal, "Adona let it go he's GONE we've been looking for a month and that... that's his"
        
        Adona is like - well at the very least let's go to the meet up spot.
        
        He is there
        
        but it's not him, it's a changeling enchanted with glamour. It gets sick by the next day, and before the week ends, it dies in Anatares' arms
        
        This is what finally breaks Antares, and he goes. Adona and Samson let him leave, they are also devastated. Everything was going so well before this, and they're all upset they didn't see a way to fix this. This feels like the end of something that barely got to start, in more ways than one.
        They bury Bryn's body, they lower the body into the grave, and then they Eulugize, (would love a cry for this "tough" boy) Samson breaks down and closes his eyes and gets upset, when he opens them there's a close up on his face as he looks to the body, his expression changes, horrified/shocked, and this part of the story ends
    - - gets them over time, some of them should probably be had during the adventure before this, they are vague and just flashes of stuff
        
        this could work like, the chapter is usually in someone elses POV, but it starts with a few flashes of vague images or even a little animation of what the dream was (a few quick images, static, stuff that is hard to make out, noises, etc.) and then we see Bryn waking up. They could happen during a time when it's clear everyone went to bed. I think it's okay to have segments where a "dream" happens if we establish a type of look for the dreams to have, and they are their own little segments. Possibly between chapters. That have title pages that just name the dreams, or say "A Dream" and then there's the dream, and then the next chapter starts.