A Coggle Diagram about The Ordinary World Lots of details and information here.
, Allies/Helpers You need to be specific about these characters and add quotations. What about Utnapishtum and Urshanabi? Shiduri?
, Supernatural #Aid
, Entering the Unknown
(He enters the unknown several times, Once to kill Humbaba, another time when he defeats a Bull from Heaven, anther when he journeys to find immortality. You need to be specific about the unknown as you have in the quotation about the forest of Humbaba.
and "'They have slaughtered the Bull of Heaven and killed Humbaba[...]" Why is this the unknown?
), Accepting the Call
(Gilgamish felt his courage return They charged at Humbaba like two wild bulls. The monster let out a deafening cry, his roar boomed forth like a blast of thunder, [...] Shamash threw strong winds at Humbaba, [...] He could not move forward, could not retreat. Gilgamesh saw it leaped upon him, he held a knife to Humbaba's throat."
), The Call to Adventure
(First test/adventure Journey
), Tests & The Supreme Ordeal There are many tests. Which is the supreme ordeal?
, Refusal of the Quest
("They came with in sight of the monster den. He was waiting inside it. Their blood rain cold. He saw the two friends, he grimaced, he bared his teeth he let out a definitely roar. He glared at Gilgamesh. 'Young man ' he said, 'you will never go home prepare to die.' Dread surged through Gilgamesh, terror flooded his muscles, his heart froze, his mouth went dry , his legs shook, his feet were rooted to the ground. Enkidu saw his dismay.'
), Reward and the Journey Home
, Master of two Worlds/Restoring the World
and Noah, parts of this are highly detailed and thorough and you make a good effort there. However, other steps are incomplete, lacking detail and quotations.