Overconsumption of Sugar within America (Blue - Solution to controlling…
Overconsumption of Sugar within America
Blue - Solution to controlling America’s sugar intake
-In my essay I would like to discuss a possible solution to the problem of overconsumption of sugar in America
-include facts and statistics to inform the reader of the actual things that are related to the overconsumption of sugar.
-Hopefully the essay will have the reader think about how this issue has possibly affected them and what they could do themselves to help with the problem at hand.
-My perspective on the issue brings about the topic of a solution to the problem as well as many other people’s perspectives do. My perspective on the issue can add to the solution and identification of a problem that has been looked at for years but very little has been done to control it.
-I can use the facts and statistics to get others thinking about what they could do about the problem. I could also reach out to those who have been affected or know someone who has been affected and see what they have to say about the topic and see if they have any ideas on a possible solution to the issue.
-My work can benefit others and assist them in developing a perspective on this issue and what they can do themselves to help control it.
-Forming a solution to control America’s sugar intake should matter to others because they should want to live a happy and healthy life and if there was a solution to the problem then watching their sugar intake could be much easier to do.
Green - Link of sugar to harmful diseases
-health effects of sugar and how the overconsumption of it directly relates to many diseases within the United States
-the problems that are associated with the overconsumption of sugar and how its affecting America’s population
-This topic is widely known but very little has been done to control it and if people are told of the consequences of sugar overconsumption maybe they will focus their attention to it
-They should also be worried about the link of too much sugar can lead to harmful diseases because this can affect anyone and this will get the reader to think about their own sugar consumption.
-The lessons that can be gained from the information given within the essay can be used to teach others of the importance of controlling their sugar intake and hopefully will be passed on to others to teach them this problem of sugar overconsumption.
Red - Overconsumption of sugar in America’s children
-I have always known that sugar is recommended on a daily basis but I had never really considered how much that actually is
-These aspects also matter because they involve many statistics and facts and they can be used to persuade the reader into getting involved with the issue in the United States
-it can affect anyone and there is a chance that it has affected someone close to them because of how big of an issue it is within the United States.
-Others should be worried about the overconsumption of sugar within America’s children because, depending on who is reading it, they probably know a child that loves sugar and want that kid to be happy and healthy but if the child consumes too much sugar then they are at a high risk for a disease of some sort
-These lessons are valuable because they teach others the importance of healthiness and watching what you eat and if done poorly can affect you in the long term
Purple - Miscellany
-I would also like to identify this issue and why it is important that people are informed of this problem.
-I can contribute by first limiting my own sugar intake but also by having others learn about the topic and can have them get involved with coming up with ideas that could possibly help to form a solution.
-This matters because the more people that are able to hear of this problem, the larger the chance of something being done to control it.
-I am interested in this topic because for a long time I have thought that sugar couldn’t be that bad for me and that nothing bad could come from eating too much sugar.
-The most important aspects of my topic are the overconsumption of sugar within America’s children, the link of too much sugar to harmful diseases, and the end goal of forming a solution to control America’s sugar intake.
-This topic should matter to others because it can affect anyone and there is a chance that it has affected someone close to them because of how big of an issue it is within the United States.
-I think that it can bring about many perspectives and ideas about the issue and what can be done to help control it.