Sound of Thunder

There was a sound like a gigantic bonfire burning all of Time, all the years and all the parchment calendars, all the hours piled high and set aflame.

Its mouth gaped, exposing a fence of teeth like daggers.

Its armored flesh glittered like a thousand green coins.

Like a stone idol, like a mountain avalanche, Tyrannosaurus fell.

After a long time, like a sleepwalker he shuffled out along the Path.

Warm phlegm gathered in Eckels' throat; he swallowed and pushed it down.

Stay on the Path. Don't go off it. I repeat. Don't go off. For any reason! If you fall off, there's a penalty.

The coins, crusted with slime, steamed.

The stink of raw flesh blew down the wilderness.

A windstorm from the beast's mouth engulfed them in the stench of slime and old blood.

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Sensory Details

Another cracking sound. Overhead, a gigantic tree branch broke from its heavy mooring, fell.

The jungle was alive again, full of the old tremorings and bird cries.

Similes

Foreshadowing

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The jungle was wide and full of twitterings, rustlings, murmurs, and sighs.

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smell of tar and an old salt sea,

Sounds like music and sounds like flying tents filled the sky,

Each lower leg was a piston,

Metaphors

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Personification

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