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WRITTING LOGLINES ((Treatment Format convention, :green_apple: Do not use…
WRITTING LOGLINES
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What
:warning:What is the protagonist main objective in the stoty?What is it that they desire,remembering that dramatic action in goal-directed action .Do thay want to protect their child.Win Someone's love.
Why
:warning:In the action DRAMATIC? In other world, what is at risk? What are the stakes? The possibility of the death of a loved one? The destruction of a way of life?A travesty of justiice?The punishment of an innocent under the guise that they are guilty?
Example Of Loglines
:warning:West side story( Romeo and Juliet) Two young lovers associated with rival gangs in the slums of New York try to escape the bigotry and violence that surrounds them to find a better life.
A GREAT LOGLINE
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IDENTIDY SIZZLE ; SEX,GREED,HUMOR,DANGER,THRILLS,SATISFACTION.
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REVEAL CHARACTER, GOAL,CONFLICT, AND THEME.
INDICATE THE FULL NARRATIVE ARC(THE STORY'S BEGINNING MIDDLE,AND END)
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THEY SHOULD BE OPEN-ENDED. BUT, WHEN WRITING INDUSTRY COVERAGE, INCLUDE CONFLICT RESOLUTION.
OPEN-ENDED FOR PITCH : AN AIMLESS AMERICAN, WOMEN,ABANDONED BYE HER BOYFRIEND IN TOKYO,IMPULSIVELY DECIDE TO TRAIN AS A RAMEN CHEF UNDER A MASTER WHOIS IMPOSSIBLE TO PLEASE
CONFLICT RESOLUTION SPECIFIED FOR STUDIO COVERAGE : An aimless American women,abandoned by son in india
Open-ended for the auduience (IMDB) : AN AIMLESS AMERICAN WOMEN IS STRANDED IN TOKYO AFTER BREAKING UP WITH HER BOYFRIEND.
( WHO,WITH AN ADJECTIVE) (FACES WHAT CONFLICT)(LEARN/DOES WHAT) (TO PERSUE/ACRCHIEVE GOAL) (BUT THE CONFLICT IS INTENSIDIED) (THE CHARACTER PASSES THE TEST/SUGGEST THEMATIC RESOLUTION)
( WHO,WITH AN ADJECTIVE) An aimless American wooman, (faced what conflict) abandoned by her boyfriend in Tokyo, (learn/does what) (to pursue/achieve goal) impulsively decides to train as a ramen chef (But the conflict is intensified) under a master who is impossible to please( The character passes the test?suggest thematic resoluton) and discover her true calling in life.
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A detailed,scene-by-scene summary of the story
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story structure, tone,message,and selling point
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Short films,no dialogue :check:half the length of film (1 page for every 2 minutes)
Short films,with dialogue :check: Half the length of film ( 1 page foe every 2 minutes )
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Feature Film :red_flag: 30 pages, Maximum
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:green_apple: Just write the story: no interruptions, no embellishments
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:green_apple:Character introduction in CAPS, followed by age in parentheses
:green_apple:Describe only what is seen and heard on camera-no desires,emotions,or thoughts of characters.
:green_apple:Write in third-person,present tense
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